Here are Carolyn’s works so far:
Trapped
Violet (Song Lyrics and a Father’s Memories)
Dusty White Horse
Flight
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Here are Carolyn’s works so far:
Trapped
Violet (Song Lyrics and a Father’s Memories)
Dusty White Horse
Flight
This page has the following sub pages.
halo~ its well-written but the story can be a bit more better and more entrancing in the sense that, the reader would feel more appalled.. I think your story lacks description though your vocabulary is sufficient.. work hard!
Yu Xin (Vivi’s friend)
Hey! Thanks so much : D
This was actually an adaptation of an essay I did for my mock exams last year, so I wasn’t allowed to be too graphic back then and I didn’t want to get too graphic here : P
I’m in the middle of another story at the moment so I’ll try and fuse your suggestion into it. (:
lol..ok..no worries..my EL is very sucky anyway..